It was pretty good.
It started out well, but then it got a little cliche, especially with the music. I like the idea, but I was hoping for something much more dark and unexpected. The animation was very well done however, I just feel like next time you should do more work on the script because you go to animation. Good luck on your next submission.
Not really portal worthy
It's not really a flash animation...it's more like an animated gif posted in flash.
I really liked your layout. You've obviously storyboarded it so that it looks as intriguing as it could.
I would just say that you need to figure out how to import more interesting drawing into the picture. If you had more innovative drawing, you'd have the full package.
OK, thanks. I tried hard on the storyboard.
You win everything forever!
You got me...
So, I was watching this, and from the beginning I'm like, "Awesome animation."
But, then the dialogue started and I was all, "Oh man this is going to be lame."
And every time a character spoke I was like, "Shit, they keep over-explaining."
I'm a turd, they totally suckered me in for the payoff.
I wish this were better.
This was beautifully animated. But there's absolutely no plot. It's just an excuse to have a bunch of random one-liners that may or may not be funny.
This could actually get picked up by a production company, but you have to have a plot. Something more cohesive than find the turtle. PLEASE do it, because you have talent!!!
Credit your music :-(
Final Fantasy is a good music project, you should always credit your source, especially when it's on the internet.
Good point man, I'll make an edit.
Why must there be such annoying sound...please don't do that.. it hurts.
Thoroughly entertaining. Thank you!
If you're going to have the characters curse so much, why bleep them?
I know you said they're staying... but it's pretty annoying. Maybe if you just use a less obtrusive bleeping. It's just fucking annoying.
And if you already know the two things that most annoy the community, are you contuing to do it just to annoy the community? I don't understand...the commentaries are boring and...well...boring.
The animation was great, just the bleeping and the commentary. It's horrible.
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